Been working on the dialogue script for my Kickstarter video.  Take a read, and let me know what you think!  --DC

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“It’s not a book I would normally read...but I’m glad I did.  I really enjoyed the story!”  

I heard that a lot from test readers.  The feedback that followed was favorable -- the action and mystery were engaging, characters resonated as they should -- all the validation a writer could want.  And yet, the first part of that statement haunted me:

“It’s not a book I would normally read...”

I’ve been writing a long time.  Finished my first novel just after high school.  As proud as I was, publishers didn’t know what to do with it.  “We like it, we just don’t know how to sell it.”  My stories often mix several genres -- they can be hard to label.  So I was all, “I’m gonna self publish!”  We’ll call that a learning experience.

Twenty years later, I’m ready for another go.  Got a fresh new concept and I’d like to think my writing has matured.  I’ve tested several drafts, had it professionally edited.  I’m feeling good about the quality and execution -- I just need people to read it!

That’s where you come in.

I want you to take a chance on the story, read it, love it, back it, and talk to all your friends about it.  So really, this Kickstarter--is all about you.

The money raised from your backing will wrap up publishing costs and fund vital PR and Marketing.  But most importantly, it’s your voice that I really need to cut through all the clutter out there. 

Years from now when The God Thought is a mega-hit (fingers crossed) I want you to be able to say to your friends: “Oh--you thought that book was awesome?  I helped make that happen!  You’re WELCOME!

Which is why by pre-ordering through Kickstarter, you can be credited IN the final book.  Your name would be printed in a special thanks section--immortalized forever as someone who backed it from the very beginning.  

So--I invite you to take that chance.  Go to my website, and read the preview chapters.  Or, email me directly, and I’ll send you an e-pub file of the first one hundred pages.  

Chances are, if you’ve made it this far--you’ll have a blast with the rest of it.

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